by katiewhore
Not perfect yet- I like your hard direct style- hows promise- looking forward to your next few. Longer/more detail in the sex please
This is usually not the type of story I like, but I have to say.. I really enjoyed it. The honesty and directness is amazing. The thought of a woman totally abandoning herself to the pleasure of others and becoming a slave/slut is very arousing. I enjoyed your writing as well. Very direct and personal. Keep writing. I want to know more about this wild, kinky, horny girl.
Finally, a story with more substance than style. Who cares about how the story is written, it's in the content. A great description of what it's like being a whore. I think I need a handjob ... too bad I'm in Byron Bay ..
Never read one like this before, but really liked your direct style. Keep writing!