All Comments on 'Katie Moves In Ch. 02'

I loved part one, and this beautifully rounds off the story. Maybe the party goers are going to come back for more fun? Keep up the (very) good work.

I hope there will be more. Thanks for your story.

Nothing overplayed ,a story told just as it should be without wandering into wild fantasy . Totally believeable .

I loved reading this story, it is absolutly great. Please write more chapters to this story and do so soon.

But too short - far too short, this theme had a lot more life in it.

Such a shame you didn't write more.

Two chapters in and still nomination of any emotional connection... 3*

This is so natural a story that it is both believable and relatable.

The length is ideal; i'd rather sensual shorter chapters than tediously long submissions that become tiring.

We know of her physically and are learning of her responses to sexual stimulation.

Will go to number three immediately.

Wonderful, well written story, so why portray a 28 year old man as bashful and lost in soul searching as a 15 year old ?