All Comments on 'Kay is Forced'

I thought you captured the reality of living out a fantasy pretty well. I sense a feeling of disappointment, mixed with some inner turmoil over wanting to be taken roughly. Along with the protagonist, the readers are left wondering and a bit confused as well.

It started out well, but it changed. And I wouldn't say it was for the good. I wouldn't say giving up is an option, though. Rather, you should try again. If you decided to change direction in a story, give a few more details so that the reader is not mixed up.

Sorry but you can not even call this a story, it is only 755 words including the Authors name and title.