All Comments on 'Kayla'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
hmmmm...

this "mature" man can't control his sex drive and forces himself on his daughter's friend. Could've been more romantic at least so it didn't seem so much like rape. To top it off, this young girl who planned on going to college and seemed to have her whole life ahead of her is now stuck having some horny, mid-life crisis dude's kid, 'cause I'm sooo sure that's what she wanted at age 18, 19, whatever. Wow way to fuck up her life for his jollies. Definitely an old man fantasy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
RE: hmmm

The person who made the previous comment is really uptight. I thought this was great. Fuxk yeah.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Red Hot - Loved it

Short but sweet!

As for the previous comment - this an erotic forum / library - not a morals class !

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
very hot

what an idiot to try to pass morals on when reading STORIES on an erotic web site, what are you doing here in the first place???? LMAO great story, very hot

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Good Read

I liked this story, but I do think its misclassified. I believe it should be under Non-Consent.

IndyMSpankUIndyMSpankUabout 16 years ago
Rape, period

This is rape, period. Nothing erotic, romantic, or that would even let you connect with any of the characters. The only realistic thing was his daughter moving out on him.

IndyMSpankUIndyMSpankUabout 16 years ago
Rape, period

This is rape, period. Nothing erotic, romantic, or that would even let you connect with any of the characters. The only realistic thing was his daughter moving out on him.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Sooo...

This means there will be a continuation of this entertainingly dirty little story, right?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
A little too much of a fantasy

These stories are mostly fantasy. But, this is just too far out there. Its rape. There is nothing to turn you on.

Camel337Camel337almost 11 years ago

Please write more about Kayla and her friend dad :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Try again...

Really? That's the best you could come up with?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Needs a 'Rape' tag.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
This needs taking down its rape

There is no consent and it is rape. Very triggering for anyone who has experienced it

Rapier875Rapier87511 months ago

Just plain nasty !

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