by kevin2005
I have read this before. Did you publish it previously?? Work on your spelling, capitolization, and punctuation. It makes it easier to read
Don't stop. I hope you have another chapter in you. Nancy sounds hot.
Terrific story, but the grammar, spelling and punctuation almost ruin the whole thing.
This is one of the most erotic stories I have read on this site...Totally enjoyed the reactions of Nancy!!