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All Comments on 'Key West Cafe Ch. 01'

by incorrigiblesatyr

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JDLYTLE1JDLYTLE1over 16 years ago
GREAT START

CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Interesting

Eric must have enjoyed it since he didn't say "palm tree".

Sounds like fun to me.....

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Liked it - hope there is more to come

Nice start...has great potential for lots of interesting directions to go.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Very sexy!!

I can foresee Eric being a very dirty boy.Thanks for sharing!!

RetMarutRetMarutover 16 years ago
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Could this develop into some kind of perverse mixture of "The Prisoner" and noir? After all we currently live in uncertain times and Eric is, to say the least, in a precarious position. Done right, your story can get good and dark.

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