by Mikro
The premise of your question is strange in "one being shown they liked women". It opens up the question then are homosexuals created by exposure from abuse, being drunk or trying it from proper roll models. That will open you up to scorn from the gay activists in suggesting such a thing.
Your style is precocious and you captured nervousness and awkwardness well, but the story was flat.
I gave you tread water rating instead of lower, because you used the world beetroot in your story. That is a first and it also means you have a connection with the land somewhere in your past. I like earthy gals as they make good conversation based in common sense.
May all the best come to you.
very erotic and could easily have happened in real life, i fantasized myself being one of the women ,, left me wet and trembling