All Comments on 'Kiowa Ch. 1'

All I can say is, "Wow!" And this coming from a mixed blood. Keep up the great work!

Ive read many stories here, with varying degrees of quality. I appreciated this one because it had storyline, rising action, backstory, climax, plot twist and imagery that included more than lust. The naughty imagery was not overblown and added to the heat of the moment appropriately. Great story, it makes me want to read further...