All Comments on 'Kira'

Your story has been reviewed in the forum Author's Hangout- New Story Review Thread.

I liked the solid imagry used in this tale, which tied in with the vampire theme well. More in the review thread

I found starting almost every paragraph with the word "I" was a little on the jarring side and took from my enjoyment of the story. It reminded me a little of the Anita series.

any more stories of these characters would be appreciated, I've rped a char very similar to Rad (both in species and situation)

this is amazing. Makes me curious on the whole novel :D