by smhgirl2002
the content of your story was amazing! i enjoyed Kitten's whole hearted desire to please and her mistresses desire to not only use Kitten for her own pleasure, but also to provide an environment that Kitten needed.
have you written any other stories?
i would have liked to see more subtle power play in the public arena as that scenario would rarely if ever happen as written (in the USA at least). i have some suggestions for future stories if you are interested. =
thanks for your story...keep them cumming!
jason
This story is an incredible turn-on. Really hot and sexy.
I loved it. It just kept going. Thank you for such a WONDERFUL story.
Just a great story, a wonderful combination of narrative and eroticism. Keep up the good work!