by NonStopFunGuy
for repeatedly stating Kristen was half Asian. There were a few times throughout the many chapters I would simply forget, so I'm glad I had those reminders over and over and over. Being half Asian must have been an important visual to get across. Hot nonetheless. Thanks for the entertainment.
One thing I can say for your writing style is that you can really express passion and excitment well. Its easy to get caught up in the story and visualize everything that is going on. It took awhile to get used to the time jumps in but after awhile it started to make sense. Very good Very hot. Good Job, especially chapter 8.
Please don't stop there. I love this series, and want to know what happens next.
Were they all on the pill or did they all get pregnant? And this story should really be continued. Have a nive day.
-A.
SO REPETITIVE, BORING, AND NONSENSE. JUST TELLING IT LIKE IT IS.
I totally enjoyed each story in this series. Loved the whole buildup to her finally getting her Daddy. So creative and so worth reading again! God job
Incredible story. Broken up alot but amazing just the same. To finally have you suck his cock as i feel my daughters lips around mine as i read it to her while her best friend is eatong her out. Thank you . It allowed me to take my daughter like you took your DADDY. I have cum 6 times today reading this amazing story!!.