by SerendipityOcean
I think I'll forward this to the boyfriend...
It expresses so well the way a girl sometimes likes it...
Great writing. Going back now to check for more.
Very well written. You put the reader in the action, making them either want to be a part of the action or feel like they are there. Good Job!
Hot...wet...hard...fast...used...erotic.
More please. Use her harder, darker, deeper filling her over and over. Take her and make her your whore.
Loved the story and the intensity ...
Nadine