All Comments on 'Lady of the Lake'

That is the sweetist story i have read in a long time...Keep it up

I really liked this story. It was very sweet, as the last person said. I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work.

*Cherry Lube*

A very warm and quiet story about something that we all have to learn the hard way. But also a perfect example of one of the best kept secrets ... that the female of our species is in fact the real sexual aggressor. Not a bad thing, because she does hold the future in her egg collection, but it is a little hard on the male ego.

avoid obvious references in sexuality. That wd make it more interesting.

Loved that the characters were believable. The story line is plausible. The sex was sweet without being the main focus. The punch line at the end was something that could happen to a young couple. Please write more like this one.

Steph

Lifeguards fall in love. Lady of the Lake is a sweet story of young love.

Awesome story, but just a couple of constructive critiques from a long ago lifeguard/Water Safety Instructor. First, a two piece suit of any sort is NOT what a female lifeguard wants to wear for a swimming rescue. A struggling victim will have that sucker off of her in the blink of an eye. Second, lake or pool water makes an exceptionally poor lubricant. Face-to-face, with the girl’s legs wrapped around me, was the only way that I could ever find to make underwater intimacy work. Any other way that I tried lost too much lubrication to the surrounding water, and made my partner’s experience very uncomfortable.

Loved your story, sweet but not overly focused on just the sex. Gave enough time for Renee and Mack to rekindle their friendship from school to begin the start of a love relationship that obviously lasted. The sex part was cute, short and sweet I loved it!

Makes me want to drag my guy out for some interesting water activities sometime when the weather warms up!