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I'd like to be able to say that we screwed again and had simultaneous climaxes at the exact instant of the fireworks finale. Damn, what a great cliché ending! But we were inexperienced, and that didn't happen. When we got out of the water, we were astonished to get a standing ovation by the entire class. They told us, laughing, that we had been silhouetted by the lights on the opposite shore and the fireworks, and that they had seen enough to know what was happening. Brian even passed around his binoculars. We had been the show, not the fireworks! We were uncomfortable at first, but everyone seemed so happy for us. They said we were a natural couple.
Beautiful Renee slept in my bed that night. It turned out that we WERE a couple. And she sleeps in my bed to this very day.
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Anonymousabout 1 year agoLoved your story, sweet but not overly focused on just the sex. Gave enough time for Renee and Mack to rekindle their friendship from school to begin the start of a love relationship that obviously lasted. The sex part was cute, short and sweet I loved it!
Makes me want to drag my guy out for some interesting water activities sometime when the weather warms up!
Anonymousabout 2 years agoAwesome story, but just a couple of constructive critiques from a long ago lifeguard/Water Safety Instructor. First, a two piece suit of any sort is NOT what a female lifeguard wants to wear for a swimming rescue. A struggling victim will have that sucker off of her in the blink of an eye. Second, lake or pool water makes an exceptionally poor lubricant. Face-to-face, with the girl’s legs wrapped around me, was the only way that I could ever find to make underwater intimacy work. Any other way that I tried lost too much lubrication to the surrounding water, and made my partner’s experience very uncomfortable.
thomas_deanover 3 years agoLifeguards fall in love. Lady of the Lake is a sweet story of young love.
Anonymousover 10 years agoLoved that the characters were believable. The story line is plausible. The sex was sweet without being the main focus. The punch line at the end was something that could happen to a young couple. Please write more like this one.
Steph
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoavoid obvious references in sexuality. That wd make it more interesting.
