All Comments on 'Larkwood Ch. 02'

by celticgold

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Well done

Has great potential, but don't drag it out. To many times writers tkink a story needs twenty chapters just to get to the frist bedroom scene. You have a very good story keep it going.

cinnamon_kisses12cinnamon_kisses12over 15 years ago
another excellent chapter!

i'm in love with these two!

rm2hrm2hover 15 years ago
Hope

Hope there is more. I am enjoying the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Very nice...

Please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Can't wait

I was excited in more ways than one to see the second chapter posted. I can't wait to read more.

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