All Comments on 'Last Day of School'

more please

I rated it three fingers, because that's what I used to rub one off while reading your story.

Really enjoyed your story which I thought was extremely well written. I liked the way you let Tom slip into his fantasy world, a little like Billy Liar I thought in places. So much so that I was never sure what was fantasy and which was fact at times.

Well done, Pete.

If this is your first attempt at a story, I cannot wait for the future chapters. I thought it was great.

Great start. More please.

wow what a great story looking forward 2 more

Kate had been accidently double scheduled at work, so she was on her way home when she called Tom to let him know the good news. Moments after arriving back, mother and son were in each others arms again, naked, and on the bed together. Tom got on top of his mom and as they passionately kissed, he moved his hips forward until his cockhead was against her pussy lips. Kate spread her legs apart further as Tom slowly entered her. Soon they were moaning into each others mouths as her son was thrusting into her vigorously. They fucked hard and fast, but it went on for ten minutes of pleasure until they were enjoying yet another magnificent orgasm together!

Okay story. It is a shame the mother had to assault/rape her son. There was no respect between mother and son. There was no passion, intimacy or any emotional chemistry. The mother wanted to have son with her son and she did. I wonder how it would go if the son was self-aware? Do not get me wrong, I have no problem with incestuous relationship in real life; however, there should be no emotional abandonment nor positional/parental power play.