All Comments on 'Last Minute Seduction'

i would not have a clue as how you came up with this story line. i do a lot of reading and analyzing of how a story is structured and how the writer came up with the idea. your story is well put together and was an enjoyment to read. but the story plus the ending was even better.

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wow. what an awesome character helen is. i know she says she's evil but she's still so hot and sexy. evil won this one. any follow up on this story would be well worth the read. great story

Wondered if you would have Helen dominate poor Margot/daisy as well...... make her the slave slut she was meant to be.... make her humiliation more complete and even more public.... perhaps Chapter 2 will delve even deeper??

I disagree that Bryan will become a cuckhold..... maybe not an Alpha dog... but NOT a cuck!!

Thanks for your contribution! Yes, there were a few typo's, but not very bad, and quite impressive for a rush job! It's a well written story, regardless of whether whether readers enjoy the evil tack.

Helen was perfectly voluptuous and evil. Hope you write more like this one. This genre doesn't have enough writers and stories.

I really enjoyed this story. I am glad to have in some way inspired this. This genre is too small, and more stories are always welcome. There were a few typos, but I still very much enjoyed this. I hope to see you write more.

I absolutely loved this one! Well, let's admit it that sometimes having been inspired by a great author turns out to be way better (more effective, that is) than being the inspirator self!!! Definitely: "5" and congratulations!

Very hot! I can see where it's been rushed a little but overall it was well written and I enjoyed it. Really hope to see more in this vein!

is wrong with you.This story is weak. Not enough cheating, betrayal und humiliation. I would prefer to see some torture and decapitation, otherwise a pure delight.3 stars for you.

Excellent! Please consider writing more stories with this same sort of reluctant seduction to betrayal theme, I love how this turned out.

I don't get off on emotional pain. I'm also a huge nerd so when I see hot chicks with ugly dudes and vice versa it makes me think good for them not oh that ugly fuck doesn't deserve to be with that person. Of course this is fiction and non consent reluct soooo I can't be too judge mental great description of Helen

Just an incredibly hot story of seduction!

Great read

Very very great story! I loved the way you describe all those slutty thoughts in Helen's mind!

Please give us some more like that!