All Comments on 'Last Present'

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Thanks for sharing.

The thing that strikes me most is how unlikeable Dieter *should* be, and he just isn't. The ending is a perfect wrap-up that has just the right amount of uplift, without contrasting too sharply with the rest of the story.

Pilot, first time I've read one of your stories. I was pleasantly surprised.

And, yes! I really did vote a 5 star. Nice job. Babs

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