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dwjeanesdwjeanesover 11 years ago
Good work

It is said that the short story is the hardest form of storytelling, due to the need to avoid irrelevant detail that can often distract from the story. This is well done, with just enough character development, and plenty of action.

Thanks for the story.

execuwriterexecuwriteralmost 7 years ago
My fantasy too

I would love to have such an experience but both my wife and I are too shy to ever do such a thing. But thanks for making me think of the possibility!

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