All Comments on 'Laura's Bunny Ch. 01'

A most enjoyable and entertaining FemDom story - thank you for sharing it with us. A few more commas and a general 'brush-up' of punctuation wouldn't come amiss, but this was very good.

Four stars - improve your presentation a little and you will get lots of fives, I am sure.

I enjoyed this and am looking forward to part two. Please keep it up.

I really enjoyed the Andi stories and hope you'll write more.

I'm a little sad this is rooted in cheating. It also seems that they are moving into this pretty fast with no discussion. Not responsible for an experienced domme. You've got him formed as a cyber addict lead by his dick. Guess that could spark its own truth vs stereotype arguement.

I couldn't stop reading... It is wrong that he is cheating but it filled my heart with joy when he knew what he was supposed to be, what he was missing. The last sentence was amazing... Great :-D

just wanted to let you know i have just read part one of Laura's Bunny and it's one of the hottest things i have read in quite a while. I really enjoyed it and look forward to reading the other chapters

This was phenomenal. We met while chatting, I'm afraid reading this became so intense that I was not at all a good chat partner. FANTASTICALLY well done. Wish there were more Dommes like Mistress Laura. Thank you!

Awesome, I loved the controlled pace she used to use him as she wanted, not as he expected. Nicely done.