All Comments on 'Laying in Wait Ch. 02'

complet and total crap

If this is the best you can do, don't give up your day job.

If he were a MAN, he whould have beat her senseless rather than suck a strap on.

Just another whimpy story.

And the creepy fans hate it

Go find a female rape story to jerk off to

...as hater the other male rape story

If it was a female rape story they would have been dribbling their cum all over the keyboard by paragraph 3

This is a wonderful story. It's so rare to find any nonconsent story that features a woman kidnapping a man. To the obviously male comments on this story, I say grow up. It's plain to me that you guys are threatened by strong women, even if they are fictional.

"Not looking a gift horse in the mouth moved onto his back as she requested."

Some of your sentences need a little work.

Going from grimace to goddess in that short of a time period was a little quick. I did not understand why she would want a child by someone that would accept that treatment form her.

What's with all the guys that can't stand a strong woman. As it was said if it were a girl in his place would Y'all still be saying the same things????? I doubt it.

Trust me, not worth reading. Author doesn't even know sentence structure, forget about understanding humanity.

i find this a very good start to the last chapter and look forward eagerly to the next chapters and hope they are as well written and thought out as the first two chapters have been.

cary

I hate stories where the rapist is not man/woman enough to do the deed without help. I hate stories where the man/woman who was raped immediately falls for the rapist. It takes a lot longer than that to break someone. And this woman had him raped by her goons and raped him herself. Yet when she released him from his bindings he didn't attack her? Pleeeeease that's totally ridiculous.

Two chapters in and I've cum as many times as he did !

I so want to be him despite being married oh God I need to get to chapter 3 urgently

Thank you for a fantastic story and making me cum xXx