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I've made myself a list of loose ends that I need to deal with. But if there's a question in anyone's mind about something or a plot line that you need to have resolution too, drop me a line. I'll compare it to my list and make sure I get it all in. I never know if the stuff clear in my mind has made it through to the audience. And thanks for the info ahead of time! •
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Brandon11over 3 years agoIt’s a good story but some of the words make no sense like coach or woad.
Anonymousover 4 years agoOne of your better ones, as it jumps around, yet remains an active part of the overall plot ... I'm trying to learn, from your writings, about how to make my own story a better read.
PS- my story is NOT about animals, although there IS some non-human in it. Tanks!
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ausvirgoalmost 8 years agoJust a comment on some comments:
1) I think it's been made pretty clear why Jenna wants revenge - She's a bitch (in the derogatory sense) - Aislinn's "crime" is to have been more attractive to two men Jenna wanted, and Cullens's was to "humiliate" her at the ceremony where she was about to kill him.
2) Interesting comment on punishing the "traitors" - it makes sense, and would be doing them a favour. Not their fault though - their mates were hostage, AND Rafe could push them to favour their mate loyalty over their pack loyalty.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoI found what you wrote heart felt and intriguing I look forward to more of your work I am serious i pay good money to read stories like what you wrote !
LynLeoalmost 12 years agoOne caveat: the "traitors" should have been punished. Yes, they all had excellent and extenuating circumstances, but still they did wrong. They expected to be punished and the pack expected them to be punished. The punishment should have been chosen to fit the circumstances, but, honestly, the "traitors" would have felt better after an appropriate punishment as proper punishment psychologically expiates feelings of guilt. And the pack would accept them back easier after an appropriate punishment. Any alpha worth his salt would understand the psychology behind this.
secretly_submissive25over 12 years agostarted as a great chapter and ended great even if it is tinged with sadness-it only makes it better
What's going to happen to celia and mack's relationship?-haven't heard anything pertaining to it
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