by xPoisonx
Chapter was bit short. Story is really good & I'm looking forward to read more.
another enjoyable chapter. hope u dont have us waiting too long for the next part.
You're really just going to stop the story right there? I love it so far! Please continue!
Have you abandoned this story or will you write another chapter? It's really a decent story and I think most readers would like to see more.
This is a really good story and is developing really well. But before you extend this series, perhaps you should elucidate a little more upon this particular chapter. You undoubtedly had the readers attention, now the hard part is to sum it all up to make us want more and not leave us half complete. Please don't view this as a negative, but more of a nudge to carry on.