by Scorpio44
I like the story but, Mark is hands down my favorite character. I love stories that have more to them than just sex.
Super story, keep up the good writing. I like your philosophy.
I'll make this short, something I have a most difficult time doing, and sweet My Dear Sir...
Chapter 7 please!! *winks and grins*
Can I add my wishes for more to all the others , this story cannot end for a long while , please more!
Loved this tale from CH-1 on. Probably could have done without the D/s scenes, but hey, I'm just a Tantric kind of guy. Everything else though, was top notch. Characters, storyline, setups, grammar, sentence structure and word useage were all superb. I don't know if you have someone editing for you, but if so, kudos to them. Absolutely first rate edit and proof. Keep pound'en dem keys! :)
What a loving tale of people loving each other and caring for each other. This cynical fellow is truly heartened by the possibilities. Thank you.
That was the best and i hope you dont stop they figure out that Jim is not the father. It won't be long until the town knows Pat is pregnant.
did`nt you mean Nick because Jim is the teenage boy so he cant be the father can he?
Pat
Atlanta,Ga
Just when I think I know what your going to write especially after giving you some ideas......you go and amaze me again. Boy!! what a wonderful twist to the story. Totally never expected for you to bring Carl back into the picture!! Fabulous!!! Wow the anticipated union between krystn and jim!! I hate that the story ended!! Keep up the wonderful work!! The Princess
I can't wait for the next instalment.
I've read everthing you have written, and can't get enough
ron mercier
P O Box # 17
Milam, MI 48160
ronmercier2@yahoo.com
Your continuing this story. Its absolutely wonderful. Can't wait for the next Chapter.
If you love your Lady half as much as the good men in your stories then you will have a long and happy union.