All Comments on 'Lesser Gods Ch. 06-09'

That last paragraph is startling. Do we really understand what's going on? Is every thing what we think it is?

but not as good as the first installment, in my humble opinion. I do like how you've captured Zoe's confused emotions, yet at the same time its her behavior that's pissing me off. Flaw on my end, not yours. I am very interested to see where this goes and hope Grey isn't more hurt by Zoe's erratic, and frankly annoying, behavior.

Thank goodness the next chapters have posted and I don't have to wait to find out what happens next! Here I go again.......

Keeps getting better.

Good job; thanks for sharing your work!

I never want this story to end but I see some comments are from 7 years ago! I can only assume you quit writing. What a tragedy since you are so gifted in your imagination and so much better than many famous writers.