All Comments on 'Lessons Learned'

You're story was mentioned in the review thread on Lit's. Bulletin Board. The forum where the review thread can be found is the Author Hangout forum.

I thought your story was great, although i do have to say it left me wanting more. I hope you decide to do more with it. I was surprised by the ending, not a bad surprise, just surprised. :)

There were some areas where it could be improved. It particularly needs more depth of feeling and explanation as to the background and context of the characters. On the other hand, there is humor and a sense of her desire to submit and please her Master, which is the main thing in terms of the BDSM theme, IMO. It certainly had its good points. I certainly want this to continue. I think that you can do plenty of chapters and get better ratings. You certainly have potential, and I would like you to live up to it.