All Comments on 'Let it Snow Ch. 02'

I loved the way u developed the story - and how the 'hero' seems all too human. And o yeah the really hot sex too!

It started off kinda slow but ended better than the first...I can't wait until next year!

The story was great, I just cant believe that the conclusion wont come out for another year!!

If you dont mind me asking, is this situation or something similar happening now and that is why the stories are submitted a year apart?

This story is great! I just wish it would be continued sooner.

in a cold winter setting...<grin>

I'm suprised the sex didn't melt the snow!

Great story~

Happy Holidays and good luck!

Truly a fantastic story. It had a fantastic plot that kept me interested the entire way through. Can't wait for the next one!

Hey, everyone, thanks for the kind words. I've gotten a handful of feedback, most asking "why wait another year"? The answers can be found at my blog:

http://upstatekinkybastard.blogspot.com

Plus some other thoughts on my stories posted here.

Thanks again, everyone.

Opt.

Liz is upset because he's seeing another woman? Why? She's the one that destroyed their relationship, and has no call on his fidelity now. Maybe she thought he'd be pining away for mer, staying away from women altogether...whatever. Maybe she's not used to competiting for a man's heart, and with Scott she's already behind the eight ball, and knows it, so she's trying to project her guilt onto him and reversing the situation. Mind game tricks from high school days.

Sure, there's a lot of sex, but a genuine story,too. The main male character is not particularly likeable, but that just adds to his allure....

Thank you for a nice story.

While I enjoyed reading it, the mixup of some details disturbed.

Quote: Jennie's hands grabbed Adrienne's hips as she pressed her face into Adrienne's pussy. I saw her tongue licking up and down furiously, as Adrienne looked down in complete and utter lust. My cock pistoned in and out of Jennie, her tongue inside Adrienne's pussy.

Didn't you mix up the names here? For me, the scene got hot upto this point, where the need to re-read several times turned the heat off.

Ok, the story was nice and all, but what the hell now! are we gonna have to wait???? Come on man, give us a break. Hustle that story up, please. Do it for your readers.

she was miserably, lately? the call was prompted by that, no a more lingering sense of loss? i agree with one comment, where she felt like she was the wronged person?

A lot of good here. A few continuity errors during the threesome. Could use some more editing but overall I really like it. Good character building for the MC. Would like the women to have more differentiating characteristics. Enjoyable read. Wish I could know what happened next.

Posting parts of a story in segments is fine. But don't post a partial story with a promise to continue, and then drop the ball. Very bad form.