by Soft1017
I'm hooked. I can't wait to read more. I love the premis and the layout, but I must admit I prefer a bit more descriptive filler between sceens.
For some reason I could never read this.BUT I am glad I did.
I totally felt her anguish. One never gets over the awkward
moments in one's life and certainly remembers the pain.
There was great sensitivity reflected in this story. Thanks for
sharing.
I'm loving the tale so far. Great work. 5 big stars! :)
I think you are off to a great start and I think I am going to really like Sara and Chris. There were a few editing issues, I must admit ,but nothing too big. Nice work for a n00b.
Very good start! I'm looking forward to what you have in store for these two.
I hope Michael tells Louise of Chris' intentions towards Sara. Sara likes Louise so she may look to her for advice about Chris.
Great first submission! I would love to see more on this couple.
This story is so freakin cute! I hope you plan on updating SOON. I don't think Chris is going to let Sara, pull away from him. This is going to be fun to read!
I liked it. Something sweet and innocent about it.
Five, for a good start.