by Kayb1234
Still a good premise.
Not fond of the kicking of his balls and the resulting pain.
You need an editor/proofreader.
You wrote: "'You don't need to breath! You don't need to breath in any air that doesn't come from asshole!" Twice you meant BREATHE, not BREATH.
Four stars.
fantastic story but if i didnt die that night after i got uncuffed i'd kick the fucking living shit out of that bitch for almost killing me by suffocation with her fat ass on my face.
Thanks, I really appreciate that a lot. I must admit that I've never ever had that happen to me and the story is pure and unadulterated fiction. I've recently uploaded the next instalment in the series and am waiting for Literotica to approve it. Check back in a day or two to find it and please let me know what you think. :)
You my friend have talent.. that was simply one of the best body worship stories, probably any story, i have read in my entire life. I dont know if its true or anything but if it was you're one lucky motherfucker.. Wow... just Wow