All Comments on 'Life at Last Ch. 08'

the story is okay, but there's not enough bdsm. You have a good style of writing, but this would do better in the lesbian section, where I'm sure it would get a good vote. I read your comment in the last chapter that this was your first story, and I'll give you a good mark for it being a good attepmt. You need more action like the first chapter(that was very good by the way)to keep it interesting for this section.