All Comments on 'Life Ch. 03'

uh arent weres supposed to hide that fact from anyone nonwere. he is telling everybody in the fucking city that he is a werwolf. going into mma fights will also draw attention to him and be bad.

hopfuly he will turn his new lover :)

A bit repetative, 'some'.

It would read better, too, if you didn't change tense within the same paragraph.

For Rashad description you said he knew terrance for 15 years and they were friends, then for Terrance description you said they've been friends for 13 years.which one is it?

In Rashad's description, I put "He has known Terrance (Samantha's boyfriend) for 15 years, and though they are friends, they have grown apart." In Terrance's description I put "He and Rashad have been friends for 13 years "

I'm sorry I wasnt clearer on the point. They have known each other for 15 years, but they have only been friends for the last 13.