All Comments on 'Life in the Harem Ch. 03'

by sirsemega

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ms_magdalenems_magdaleneabout 16 years ago
Nice!

I love the way this story is progressing, keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
You need to find an editor

Story is basically good but for your spelling errors which interrupt the flow of the story.

kabaa4mekabaa4meabout 16 years ago
more?

All I can ask is when will there be more? The characters are well fleshed out and the descriptive style of writing leaves the reader left wanting nothing more than to click on the next page. Very well done.

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