All Comments on 'Lifestyles of the Rich and Depraved'

Fair but not real good, not real hot and not sweet as you said you wanted.

A strange place to end it.

It wasn't bad. It wasn't great. It could turn into a good story if you can elaborate in future chapters.

The big WHY? question and all

i liked this piece :) it's interesting rather than erotic, and the proofreader missed a few things. There wasn't anything sweet about it - in fact it's quite emotionless.

I meant "short and sweet" as "short and to the point". No, it isn't romantic. I intended it to be rather cold, other than the narrator's growing fascination with Aloof.

Sorry for the confusion.