All Comments on 'Lightning Crashes'

I enjoyed reading this, thanks for writing it!

Don't normally like incest stories but otherwise this was a hot little story. Great sex. Sex in the rain is always steamy.

'Cause I saw Daddy as a pet name for her lover... not as her actual father. Don't know that you meant it that way... but it worked for me in my mind.

Nicely done. :)

'Cause I saw Daddy as a pet name for her lover... not as her actual father. Don't know that you meant it that way... but it worked for me in my mind.

Nicely done. :)

Thank you for writing this- It means so much to me....

xx

Noel