All Comments on 'Like a Wall'

It was a good start and I am looking forward to see what happens next. Knowing that english isn't your first language it would help in the future to a an editor that knows english as a first language. It will help with the flow of the story. Somes parts of the story were a little hard reading. If you would like I would edit them for you to help out.

The story itself isn't bad, but you might want to consider having someone who speaks English well to read over it and correct it next time.

Even if English is your fourth language, there are lots of talented free editors on Literotica. Your story was interesting, and could have been moved from OK to excellent with the use of a good editor.