All Comments on 'Like It or Not Ch. 02'

by rapeamaiden

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Nitro70652Nitro70652almost 13 years ago
Amazed

I noticed this second installment so I had to read the first before this one. I would have liked to comment on the first one but either My antique computer or something within Literotica didn't allow that. My amazement comes from seeing your biography. I fully expected this story to be authored by a Man. So congratulations on telling this story so perfectly from basically a Man's POV, with the woman's thought processes too. 5 stars, and excellently told.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
what a judgemental bitch

To the previous poster wtf did you think this story was going to be about? Puppy dogs & rainbows? Yes this story caters to a different crowd but you were warned at the beginning. If you didn't like the story, you should've clicked off and gone to a different one. I personally like the way the story is going and hope it continues

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Wow

I thought this story was written by a male, too! Good job! It's nice to know that some women understand what's going on in the mind of a male dom. :)

JynxGravelynJynxGravelynover 10 years ago
Disappointed

I liked your first story in the series. But this one made me sad. Why did he kind of neglect his first slave and get new ones? And then use those ones more? When I was reading the part where he got the new slaves I thought "Well maybe he'll realize that him and his first slave had something special, and ditch the two new slaves." But as I read on to the end, I felt a bit betrayed. If I was in that position I would be a bit more pissed off than just being "jealous." I thought this one was a bit cold-hearted, and I couldn't even read all of it.

princesskittenmeprincesskittenmealmost 7 years ago

I loved the first chapter but i couldn't finish the second one.it was very sad and depressing that he got new slaves and betrayed her.i was hoping for this to turn into a great series where they would fall in love but sadly he decided to bring in new slaves๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž

rapeamaidenrapeamaidenover 6 years agoAuthor
It has been a long time

It amazes me that this still gets people reading and occasionally commenting, or even sending me messages. When I wrote this story.. I truly knew NOTHING about BDSM. At best I had vague misconceptions on what a Dom was. Although I stand by this version of a Dom being valid, the dynamic here obviously isn't beyond some people's likes. It certainly isn't the type of Dom I would truly want in real life. I wrote this during a very dark period in my life, and many of the things in this story are fantasies I've had for a very long time. Some things are more fear than fantasy, which can be fun to explore in a safe way also. Fantasy is sometimes just that. Nothing more than fantasy. Thank you for those that gave feedback. I'm not sure I would ever add another chapter. I do have ideas, but I have changed a lot as an individual. I have grown substantially and have a far better understanding of myself and my turn ons. I don't know that I could pick up where this left off and not have it feel discombobulated.

Clarissa72Clarissa72about 4 years ago
Liked it but...

I was disappointed that he was going to sell the babies. Ik itโ€™s a story and it is a well written one. But selling the babies like puppies just doesnโ€™t feel right. Like the first woman she seems to care for her babies. By taking their children I get the feeling mutiny will occur regardless of there subserviency to him.

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