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gimmie_your_loadgimmie_your_loadalmost 14 years ago
Great Story!

Great job hun! I really enjoyed the story. The imagry was wonderful and enticing. Keep it up!

pavlovpavlovalmost 14 years ago
Serious shit

This is soem really serious, very good shit! I totally liked the story and the graphic images! Thanks!

ExoManiExoManialmost 14 years ago
Great Story

Very well written and very hot! I'll have to read more of your stories, in the near future.

pavlovpavlovover 13 years ago
Hungarian translation

Wanna read it in Hungarian? Here it is: http://www.tortenetek.hu/browse.php?act=detail&wid=31920&tid=41835

CafeExtremeCafeExtremeover 13 years ago
Excellent

Congratulations on a vivid and well written story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Excellent!

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I love writing, words, language and fantasies. And sex. Lots of sex. I love watching someone come. I love seeing the expression on their face and the way they twist and writhe. I love it even more when I'm responsible. :-D