All Comments on 'Lines'

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libertarianlibertarianalmost 15 years ago
Great

This was a well written and plotted out story. I am eager to see the next chapter in this relationship. Maybe Miss Sterling and suzy can be presented before the 'School Board'.

PrincessKiwiPrincessKiwialmost 15 years ago
Well worth the wait!

Bloody brilliant! And take the credit yourself - you wrote it and you deserve the praise! It all came together fabulously - well done! x

Rare_NaivetyRare_Naivetyalmost 15 years ago
Beautifully executed

Superbly written and incredibly erotic on many levels...a belivable scenario...i do hope there is lots more to come :)

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