All Comments on 'Lisa Plays at Swing Club'

by Lisa34d

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roomfor1moreroomfor1moreover 12 years ago
Story is quite mechanical

Overall the story is not bad and it is definitely not one of the worst stories I have read in the "Loving Wives" category. However the story lacks the extras that makes a good story and makes it great. It reads a lot like a first attempt at recalling the details of an event without including feelings, sights, smells, and sounds.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Still indication of your IQ (34)

Just a typical LW cheating wife story. Nothing interesting.

playman64playman64over 12 years ago
Very Good

I have started following your stories.

I like your profile and that your stories are real.

Thanks for the pleasure of reading and cumming.

Steve

BarbaraBarbaraover 12 years ago
LISA 34? Possibly the sheer number of 'subnormal; readers voting 5 it takes to be a successful writer!

With an estimated IQ of 34, Mr Anonymous probably takes it up the ass himself, like those unfortunate Woodsmen from the movie "Deliverance" That inane comment likely reflects his own limited IQ? Fear not: The USA is over-supplied in those dummies!

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