All Comments on 'Listen When Sibyl Speaks Pt. 01'

I'm glad to see that you kept your high standarts (I began reading goddesses). I'm eager to read the next part.

I've read much of your work and do enjoy the depth of your storylines. Looking forward to reading more about Sibyl, Lucia and Faith!

I love all your work. You inspire me to write, but I fear my stuff would only be blatant rip off of your stuff and you are an amazing artist.

Believe me I tagged the hell out of this but somehow my tags disappeared while posting. It looks like Literotica staff put some general ones based on the story description. I wish I knew how to replace them so I could have this story reach it's intended crowd.

I want to like this story, but I just don't find the transgender thing all that sexy. Also, if the military was interested in a super soldier, Sibyl being transgender doesn't make a lot of sense. I feel like Sibyl could have been a man and this story been exactly the same. Going forward you might want to tag the story as transgender or consider posting in that category.

wooo....want more of this