All Comments on 'Listening to Chloe'

Next one is more complete. Even for a short story you still left it hanging. Thanks for sharing. Good luck on your next submissions.

you were born to be a cuckold huh

What a loser, one good thing it was short.

Just another trash tale by another loser.

What the hell does this story have anything to do with a loving wife ???

I don't think you have found your calling in the writing of this story Cuckodry is a Fetish as if you didn't know 1 Star and it would be less if it couls be

This actually appears REAL

If this is your wife or she's gonna be then dude, you have some serious brain issues,you're looser wimp

...perhaps you should have thought before writing this story or at least putting it in the loving wives category.

and mental help a one night stand artist is never marriage material

Turd eater,there is a place for her and her Ilk in wet concrete on the road to bloody London. But if turd eaters are your cup of tea enjoy.

Today's submission to LW we have 4 of your kind,looks like a rush and a waste of readers time

'in to' instead of 'into' - I did finish reading your incident, but I was pretty sure it was NOT going to be a story! Your opening suggests Chloe became a significant part of your life later. Not exactly qualified as a 'Loving Wife' (or even 'Loving GF') entry! The erotic interaction component of this incident is conjecture from eavesdropping (not even voyeurism!) plus a quick yank and a single fellatio tease! WOW!!!

If you MUST continue, please get a good editor...not so much for spelling and grammar (which ARE seriously flawed) but for story planning and development!

Despite being so disappointing here's 3* to encourage you to put a bit more thought into your next one. A seriously bad couple of days in LW. Have all the decent authors given up? Who can blame them.

This is your wife? or someone you wanted to be your girlfriend or wife? Each to thier own I guess. I am glad I don't know any women like this female character.

in the world but these two? Do not have kids. Your gene pool is so poluted they are liable not to have digiits or some other important body part.

but all the horrible mistakes in it made me quit reading it part way through. I strongly suggest you find a good volunteer editor on Literotica.

get rid of the whore before it is too late and you marry the bitch