by InnocentPrincess18
Please add more meat to her little bones - What more does she feel about each moment ? What is her anticipation and growing understanding ?
she wasnt ready for anything she should have sucked a few cocks in high school to get ready for the real thing
One of the waters has a double T. I'd very much like him to be gentle to start with
But very short sharp and clinical
The best stories have a lot more detail as to how they are feeling , build up, etc.
TBH this is a great format but feels rushed.
Very nice start!!! Looking forward to seeing this story develop!!! Good luck...