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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
more!

Please more chapters to this story.. such a tease

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
more

very good start I would like more

Butterflies512Butterflies512over 10 years ago
my interest

has been piqued...

mickymouse113mickymouse113over 10 years ago
Intessting

Looking forward to seeing where this is going...

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
A so skinny Chapter

Please add more meat to her little bones - What more does she feel about each moment ? What is her anticipation and growing understanding ?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
she need help

she wasnt ready for anything she should have sucked a few cocks in high school to get ready for the real thing

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
This is good

One of the waters has a double T. I'd very much like him to be gentle to start with

MasterfuljimMasterfuljimover 10 years ago
Ok

But very short sharp and clinical

The best stories have a lot more detail as to how they are feeling , build up, etc.

TBH this is a great format but feels rushed.

Brokenangel479Brokenangel479over 10 years ago
Nice!!!

Very nice start!!! Looking forward to seeing this story develop!!! Good luck...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
quote

" He paused and looked me in the eyes, "You lying BITCH!" "

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