All Comments on 'Little Bear Ch. 03'

by TheRambler

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PyroPyroover 15 years ago
Wonderfully Written

You tackled this subject well, and with excellent tact. My only criticism is that, in the first part of the series, his sister asks him to talk dirty to her, etc. We get all of her side of the conversation, but it's as if her brother remains mute during sex. I would have liked it a little more if he had been more vocal during the scenes as well.

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