All Comments on 'Livi's New Leash Ch. 02'

this is strangely arousing me.

I disagree with Queen Vicky..... it's very arousing. I only marked it 4 stars because of the various word errors.... Some proof reading could help.

I like so far, please post more soon!

thanks for all the feedback, guys! sorry for the pretty long delay. i've been traveling. i do agree that some proofreading is in order. admittedly, i was a little excited about getting that 2nd post up after the reception to the first. i'll be sure to do a better job in the future.

stay tuned! :)

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Seriously I love this story and would love for you to continue!!!

If I had been in the girls predicament, this ridiculous statement would have made me chuckle, inside. Maybe the only light moment ever in this situation, but really warranted. One of the worse , repetitive mishaps in this type of story is to say Sir, when you mean Master. In modern usage and in even casual usage, you don't mean master when you say sir. But never mind. How many people do you know named Sir?