All Comments on 'Locker Room Shower Appointment'

Erotic!

❤

hope you come back and do more ... you have a nice style especially in the sex portion ... would love to see more back story and pre-sex interaction ... I think you'd excel at that

were bothe your cocks cut or uncut? It is not the same to handle an uncut cock: can give you special pleasures!!!

great story and very hot.the only objection i have is that the coach had to interupt.....otherwise they might of went further and added some oral to it

I enjoyed this story ... the coach watching them [secretly] gave it a nice bit of excitement at the end.

Thank you all for your kind words. I am currently awaiting approval of the sequel.

This story felt hot to me!

few gramatical errors, but sooooo fucking hot. Puulleeeeeeezz! continue to write more.