All Comments on 'Logan and Lauren'

It was a daydream, you jackasses.

this easy loose pussy bitch ruined the story for me, i thought she was day dreaming, yep i'm stopping here, picking up my books and exiting this library.

She was too easy

I was reading woith disgust and disdain for this asshole, and then Lauren woke up. Nice job. I doubt anyone saw that coming. The way you had already portrayed him as being so smug and conceited made it believable. I'm glad it was just a dream. I hope there's more to come. There's a great opportunity here for a touching love story.

nice

Very hot and descriptive!! Glad it was a dream.

It was a dream. That took me by so much of a surprise xD Seriously, you had me on that one. Good job.

I just discover this story and I can't wait to read more.

thank goodness it was a dream. i actually thought he was raping her.

i was thinking this had to be a dream...its too early for that stuff right? lol

Great story and great state to

Lol! I love the "it was all a dream" twist. I can't wait to read more.

this one is no exception. I can't wait to find out if Logan thinks Lauren is just as hot as she thinks he is. I love how she is so mean to him, unlike the rest of the school. Was literally ROTBed laughing at him calling her out in the parking lot and speeding off. I would've been mad too, this mofo got people under the impression that I'd accept a date with his conceited ass. HA

Please continue this story

Great start...I hope you decide to add some more on these two....

Great start.

nice start i think it will be a great story keep going!

So far so good, can't wait for the next update!

Can't wait to read the next installment of these two, you have me interested for more!

Absolutely great story, can't wait for the rest!!

Five stars.