All Comments on 'London Underground Ch. 02'

@Plusher - I reeeeaaaaaallllly enjoyed this chapter.

maybe because the kinks featured in this one hit closer to home, maybe because being a writer here on Lit i could totally identify with Suzy watching her scores closely and being so pleased when her ratings climb...

you know, thinking about it some more this is such an AWESOME idea! Lit should totally offer tokens like that! maybe i could afford some toys that way... hehehe ;-)

anyways i LOVED it - the writing is awesome, the story an original, super-realistic fantasy and i am left wanting to read much, much more about Suzy. well done! 5/5*

At the thought of a custom made vibe, exactly tailored to the individual.

Where to you apply for a fitters apprenticeship ?

Methinks I have been reading too many mucky books recently and need a cold shower.

Well written sir and a good 5/5

@STG - I could hug you! Loving that you're enjoying this, it's a joy to write. There's lots more to cum from Suzy and her friends, stay tuned! Yes! Lit should really offer some sort of reward

@Masterfuljim - *chuckles* the story of how the vibe is made will be told at some point, keep checking for updates

Your story so far is unique, imaginative, deliciously graphic and incredibly well written. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Chapter 3 has been submitted today, hopefully it won't be too long going up

An unusual, interesting series. Good job with the backstory, and hints of Suzy's past relationships.

It's been a joy to weave this tale, lots more to come including back story on all the main characters so far and further filthy adventures along the way.