by yankeedog
keep it coming man. This is the hottest story ever!!!!
THIS STORY IS SOOOOO AWESOME U HAVE TO MAKE A SEQUEL I WANT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS BETWEEN HIS WIFE AFTER HE TURNS BACK INTO A MAN
after reading your story,i wish i could experence being a woman. could be a great experence.
your stories need to be edited for misspelled words, etc. use a dictionary.
I LOVE THIS... please, please, please keep it going. I'm on my hands and knees with pouty lips begging you to keep this story going. Ignore the negative comments of the previous critics, they are obviously jealous because they didn't think of this first. You wrote that this was occurring six months ago and "she" already changed the past by not buying champagne at the store, with that in mind I would love to see her encounter her former self and have a wild, mind-blowing night with "him." That would just be the most fascinating experience yet. Fucking her male self ;)I LOVE IT!!!
This is hot on so many different levels! I had to read every part of this story from start to finish and by the way, please finish it! The ending is too open and i wanna see what happens on the cruise!
wow i wish i could turn into a chick now, keep it coming a gr8 story so far
Well worth continuing: it feels like (without truly knowing) you have captured the essence of being a woman well. I could understand however if you leave it here. Either way, thanks for the enjoyment this series has given me.
You really need to continue this. I've been reading this for a few days now. It's great. I wanna know if he turned back into himself or if his Laura sexcapades will continue.
Thankyou for the story and the ride it takes us on great fun and great writing . . thankyou
Great writing and story line, I have enjoyed it all. Would really like to read about their cruise. Thank you for your efforts.