All Comments on 'Lori Ch. 04'

I loved the plot twist of the issues with Lori's parents: agreat piece of story telling.

Lori's father gave in. It's not easy for a father to let go of his teenage daughter, especially when she hasn't graduated from high school yet. Although love conquers all, and even though she's technically an adult, there are still a lot of things Lori and Mike need to learn. A great story, though--five stars, at least.

Really enjoying the series and hope you continue this fine work

Well written stories and the way you ended chapter four leaves you open to continue which I, and probably a few others, wish you would do.