All Comments on 'Losing Control at the Lake Ch. 05'

This part seemed to be lacking something that the others had. But keep writing I absolutely LOVE this series!!!

In my delusions of reference, I found a similar story floating in the ether.

The ages are different, but it's all so familiar.

I thought my lover was my sister for a minute, and I still wanted to fuck her forever.

....Just saying.

Hot series.

Just came across this series and read through all its chapters to date and for the most part it's great, very steamy. But I had to say that I'm a little disappointed with how you've left the situation with Derek unresolved thus far. It's obvious he's got feelings for Dana but the poor guy is just left hanging, pretending everything's ok, even helping to cover up for Dana and Jayme, and Dana doesn't seem all that concerned about it. I hope you eventually tie up that particular loose end in this series.

Thanks so much for the feedback! Dana is not giving Derek too much thought right now, but Derek is ALWAYS thinking of Dana, so although many people protested that dynamic, there's more coming (no pun intended) with the siblings. Hope you enjoy this series as much as I have enjoyed writing it. It's a pleasure to share!

Could've been better. Again, I think you ended this chapter too quickly. Really good writing, though.